Sand-pit. Dunes, structures, and contrasts.

Saul · 03-12-2009, 03:21 PM

Please comment my pictures. I accept all critique of any kind. Be fair. I am amateur, still learning and your thoughts are important.

Thanks

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JHfwp · 03-12-2009, 08:25 PM

I think they're all very interesting and I really like the look of your first three photos. I've stared for a while now and I'm still not sure what I'm looking at (that's a compliment--I get bored here easily some days). The last one might be great too, but I would like to see a larger version.

FHPhotographer · 03-13-2009, 05:52 PM

Saul, good work; I particuarly like the blue duotone (?) although I have a bias against silhouette . My only suggestion would be to try a HDD compsotive to bring out a bit more of the structure. Here's a hand link on the technique, High Dynamic Range (HDR) Photography in Photoshop CS2
Brian

Urmas R. · 03-14-2009, 02:34 AM

I really like the third one. It's and excellent photo! Great composition and PP.

The first one has also good composition. I only wonder, whether it might look better in color?

Saul · 03-14-2009, 07:08 AM

Thanks.
No, colors in a first one where faded, because it was sunny midday (you could se it by shadows). I will have to come back there before the dawn.

What about the last picture? It seams that no one likes this shot, while I find it interesting. I'm biased.
You would be surprised how little PP has third picture. Though it is PP-cessed.

03-12-2009, 03:21 PM	#1
Saul New Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Lithuania Photos: Gallery Posts: 13	Sand-pit. Dunes, structures, and contrasts. Lens: 31 mm.; DA 50 - 135 Camera: Pentax K20D ISO: --- Please comment my pictures. I accept all critique of any kind. Be fair. I am amateur, still learning and your thoughts are important. Thanks Attached Images Last edited by Saul; 03-12-2009 at 03:27 PM.

03-14-2009, 07:08 AM	#5
Saul New Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Lithuania Photos: Gallery Posts: 13 Original Poster	Thanks. No, colors in a first one where faded, because it was sunny midday (you could se it by shadows). I will have to come back there before the dawn. What about the last picture? It seams that no one likes this shot, while I find it interesting. I'm biased. You would be surprised how little PP has third picture. Though it is PP-cessed. Last edited by Saul; 03-14-2009 at 07:14 AM.

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03-12-2009, 08:25 PM	#2
JHfwp Veteran Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Posts: 876	I think they're all very interesting and I really like the look of your first three photos. I've stared for a while now and I'm still not sure what I'm looking at (that's a compliment--I get bored here easily some days). The last one might be great too, but I would like to see a larger version.

03-13-2009, 05:52 PM	#3
FHPhotographer Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Fountain Hills, AZ Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,297	Saul, good work; I particuarly like the blue duotone (?) although I have a bias against silhouette . My only suggestion would be to try a HDD compsotive to bring out a bit more of the structure. Here's a hand link on the technique, High Dynamic Range (HDR) Photography in Photoshop CS2 Brian

03-14-2009, 02:34 AM	#4
Urmas R. Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Germany Posts: 179	I really like the third one. It's and excellent photo! Great composition and PP. The first one has also good composition. I only wonder, whether it might look better in color?

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