chicago night

zj4c · 04-09-2009, 07:12 PM

These three pictures were taken early March when I went to Chicago for a conference. Picture 1 was taken by FA50 f/1.4. Pictures 2 and 3 were taken by using 18-55 AL II. Your comments are appreciated.

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nmbubblehead · 04-10-2009, 07:43 AM

Hi

I like the cropping on number 2 and the color of number 3. All three of them need some straighting. All the buildings seems to be leaning slightly to the left. The color in number 1 and 2 needs some work. Were this taken from a boat or pier??

zj4c · 04-11-2009, 03:02 AM

Originally posted by nmbubblehead

Hi

I like the cropping on number 2 and the color of number 3. All three of them need some straighting. All the buildings seems to be leaning slightly to the left. The color in number 1 and 2 needs some work. Were this taken from a boat or pier??

These pictures were taken on a tripod with remote shutter release. All of them were not processed since I am not very good at PS. Thank you for your comments.

FHPhotographer · 04-11-2009, 02:16 PM

Have to agree with the guy from Roswell, cropping #3 would do wonders. Here's one quick suggestion, just for composition,
Brian

axl · 04-12-2009, 03:27 PM

Originally posted by FHPhotographer

Have to agree with the guy from Roswell, cropping #3 would do wonders. Here's one quick suggestion, just for composition,
Brian

very good suggestion indeed...

PS: just clone out the plane or star or whatever that whit line in upper left part is

BR

Urmas R. · 04-15-2009, 01:44 PM

The two first images need some white balance adjustment. Also the exposure time could have been a bit too long. The third one is a beauty.

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04-10-2009, 07:43 AM	#2
nmbubblehead Inactive Account Join Date: Apr 2009 Location: Roswell, NM Photos: Gallery Posts: 16	Hi I like the cropping on number 2 and the color of number 3. All three of them need some straighting. All the buildings seems to be leaning slightly to the left. The color in number 1 and 2 needs some work. Were this taken from a boat or pier??

04-11-2009, 03:02 AM	#3
zj4c Inactive Account Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Baltimore, MD Photos: Gallery Posts: 12 Original Poster	Originally posted by nmbubblehead Hi I like the cropping on number 2 and the color of number 3. All three of them need some straighting. All the buildings seems to be leaning slightly to the left. The color in number 1 and 2 needs some work. Were this taken from a boat or pier?? These pictures were taken on a tripod with remote shutter release. All of them were not processed since I am not very good at PS. Thank you for your comments.

04-11-2009, 02:16 PM	#4
FHPhotographer Veteran Member Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Fountain Hills, AZ Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,297	Have to agree with the guy from Roswell, cropping #3 would do wonders. Here's one quick suggestion, just for composition, Brian

04-12-2009, 03:27 PM	#5
axl Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Nove Zamky, Slovakia Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 7,183	Originally posted by FHPhotographer Have to agree with the guy from Roswell, cropping #3 would do wonders. Here's one quick suggestion, just for composition, Brian very good suggestion indeed... PS: just clone out the plane or star or whatever that whit line in upper left part is BR

04-15-2009, 01:44 PM	#6
Urmas R. Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Germany Posts: 179	The two first images need some white balance adjustment. Also the exposure time could have been a bit too long. The third one is a beauty.