Congrats on your new lens!
Some nice shots here. But the first thing which struck me when I opened the thread was the very distracting backgrounds and lack of simplification. There is just way too much clutter here for my taste. Sorry.
#4. The chopped-off sign is particularly distracting.
#5. Probably my favourite of the series.
#6. May I see the colour version if possible? I would like to see the colours in that scene, especially of the toy truck near the lower-left corner. Not sure if B&W was the best choice here.
#7. There is a quite in-focus fence in front of the camera.
Next time, you could try to use a longer focal-length lens, and "zero-in" an a face, using a large aperture to blur the background. Or with a W/A lens, simply walk around, testing various angles until you find the ideal one, remembering to shoot
a lot from all angles.