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07-28-2009, 10:17 PM   #1
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Tried some perspective correction on this one.
Tried to make sure the central vertical line was.....
....well, vertical.
Does the vertical line on the right edge of the building look ok?

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The first vertical from the right (where the dental mold begins up top) really looks at odds with the edge of the picture and even the middle of the picture. The small black columns at the bottom right likewise.

edit - columns on RIGHT, not left

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Something seems wrong on the right....but it might be the building itself. If you hadn't mentioned it I don't think I would have picked up on it.....

(too bad someone butchered the tree)
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QuoteOriginally posted by smc Quote
(too bad someone butchered the tree)
I don't think that was a trimming. The tree looks like its in the middle of being removed entirely.

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This image is a victim of... perspective, there are so many competing angles. Those verticals could be straightened a little more, the wall on the far right will also be nice and straight then. All the other horizontals are going to look like theyh are going downhill though.
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Everything on the right of the tree seems a little bit off. Also, the image in general looks like it's gotten too much shadow/highlight correction; the edges near the sky have a glowing effect, and there aren't many dark areas.

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