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10-12-2009, 08:19 PM   #1
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10-14-2009, 10:35 AM   #2
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looking for some advice

Just a bump to get some advice, you can see I haven't received anything anything yet.

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I like the composition and post processing of your images. The sky in the second shot is amazing, but I have allready told you

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10-14-2009, 12:53 PM   #4
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Mate, both are simply stunning images.
It's the post-production that makes these shots so appealing.
First frame in a frame shot is well executed and beautifully lit - it also helps thats the background is so picturesque.
Second image has a dramatic sky emphasised by the high contrast adjustment, I wouldn't change much from the result shown here.
Well done.

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I've just begun looking through your website, which doesn't work so well with Opera BTW, but I'm very, very, impressed so far.
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Thanks everyone, very much appreciated!
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Just a minor thing, I would crop the step out of the first one, those blown highlights draw the eye away from the action. Alternatively you could process it a little to repair the blown area but I think a tighter crop makes the image work better.

I'd like to see how the second one would look taken from closer to the ground, I think it would add a feeling of space that the original may be lacking.

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