First image: I'm with Ash, subject isn't obvious, I keep looking at that curly stalk near the middle at the bottom. You just need to work on the composition (and maybe the title
).
Second image is rather pleasant. Nice and simple, some would say having the one of the stalks come out of the corner of the frame as a lead in line would be better. But they're about
a third of the way in and they stop about a third of the way from the top so I think that's just as good. The water looks good as well. Nice work.
Last edited by Damn Brit; 12-03-2009 at 10:30 PM.