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12-13-2009, 02:25 PM   #1
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Senior bird portrait
Lens: 17mm Camera: Pentax k-m ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 1/180s Aperture: F6.7 

I wasn't sure whether I should put this in abstract or nature so... Anyway, tried a little bit of cross-processing and other PP, trying to make it a bit surreal. I think it looks more comical than anything though. One thing I really don't like at all is the colored rocks/wood interfering with the subject. Any thoughts?



12-13-2009, 03:55 PM   #2
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Black and White would make it more dramatic, it's a bit of a shame about the large rock at top right dominating the frame.
12-14-2009, 03:30 AM   #3
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... it's a bit of a shame about the large rock at top right dominating the frame.
Well, yes and no, depending on how closely you view it. This is what caught my eye originally. If I downsized it enough...or maybe I am just "working" too hard. LOL
If you back away from your monitor, you can probably see what I am trying to say. Or not, I haven't had much sleep lately.
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12-14-2009, 03:34 AM   #4
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I've just noticed, the two sticks make it look like it has it's legs crossed. Perhaps it was dying for a piss.

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I've just noticed, the two sticks make it look like it has it's legs crossed. Perhaps it was dying for a piss.
LOL! Poor little bird...(I have been there!)
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