Both are nice sharp shots, I like them. The composition on #1 seems a bit too central to me. The composition on #2 seems disbalanced as the bird is on one side and looking completely out of the picture.
Originally posted by wallyb they are oversharpened
How can you tell this? I don't disagree, by any means, I'm just curious. I thought it was when you see could black or white lines contouring every subject, but I don't see that here.
Originally posted by wallyb I would suggest for the future, maybe to try shooting "behind" the bird, through the branches, with the lens pointed toward, say, another building or a hill or something. Instead of being pointed towards the tree, with more branches behind the subject. Then just wait for the bird to strike a pose facing you (since he will usually be facing outwards towards the street/park/whatever).!
Sorry, I'm not sure I'm following but it sounds interesting.
Are you saying one should be mindful what's behind the bird and try to have something else but the tree branches there?
I think it's that but sometimes I think you meant to walk around the tree and shoot the bird from behind it or maybe to focus slightly behind the bird to have more branches behind it and not before it sharp...