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02-16-2010, 09:22 PM   #1
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Stripe on Petal
Lens: DA 100 Camera: K7 Photo Location: Under the kitchen light ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: 2s Aperture: F22 

I was gonna post this in the minimalist thread, but thought............what the heck.
Let's see what ya think of it.

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02-16-2010, 09:34 PM   #2
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Nicely framed, it is a little dark though. Which side did you crop from? If it was from the left, a little more negative space wouldn't hurt. If it was from the right, crop it a little more, that ruffling on the right hand edge spoils it.
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yeah, what is that weird ruffling anyways? I agree, crop it out and it'll be vastly improved. I also agree that it's a bit dark, but I'm not sure how much detail you'd be able to pull out of that dark area without ending up with a lot of noise.

Otherwise, I really like this picture. The framing looks good, and the colours are gorgeous.
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