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herzzreh · 03-19-2010, 04:21 PM

GoremanX · 03-20-2010, 09:21 PM

I think you'd get a better framing if your cropped out some of the top to reduce the sky a bit and get rid of the gutter downspout. Careful not to cut off any of the right person's ear. Maybe find a way to clone out that hand in the bottom left, too.

It bugs me that the middle lady is almost completely obscured by smoke. And the person standing behind that woman's hair is distracting.

I love looking at this scene, though. The colour and contrast is great, and it just seems "interesting" to me.

03-19-2010, 04:21 PM	#1
herzzreh Inactive Account Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Juneau, AK Posts: 72	At a temple Lens: 20mm Camera: k10d ISO: 400 Shutter Speed: 1/250s Aperture: F9.5

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03-20-2010, 09:21 PM	#2
GoremanX Veteran Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Georgia, VT Photos: Albums Posts: 1,657	I think you'd get a better framing if your cropped out some of the top to reduce the sky a bit and get rid of the gutter downspout. Careful not to cut off any of the right person's ear. Maybe find a way to clone out that hand in the bottom left, too. It bugs me that the middle lady is almost completely obscured by smoke. And the person standing behind that woman's hair is distracting. I love looking at this scene, though. The colour and contrast is great, and it just seems "interesting" to me.

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