ISO and shutter speed are too high and too slow again, get a tripod.
Keep your subjects out of the center, all the space around them is wasted.
Nix the Noise Ninja talk (see my comments in your other thread), if I see you mention it again I won't give you any feedback.
No need to refer to the other threads you've posted, if people want to comment on them all they'll see them and do so. Just the picture and the settings are all we need.
Go to the library and check out a few basic photography books. You want to learn the basics, exposure, the three settings (Shutter, Aperture and ISO) and how they relate to each other, depth of field (DOF) and composition.
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