Win a Pentax Limited Lens: Raffle Now Live!

shooz · 04-04-2010, 09:12 PM

Not sure if this is too centered.
The way the petals flow tends to bring the eye to the right.
Is there too much darkness to the left?
That being asked, I like the feel of the shot.

Attached Images

icywarm · 04-04-2010, 10:18 PM

I' think it could be moved more to the left, but also up a bit, cuts off the top of the flower... nice looking flower... what is it?

mrdfred · 04-05-2010, 07:18 AM

I like the soft, pastel coloring and lighting. The black backround seems appropriate for this subject. The out of focus petel on the bottom bothers me, maybe clone it out? Also, where it is cropped at the top seems abrupt, is there more up there?

Tuner571 · 04-08-2010, 03:58 PM

I too like the feel of the shot, the lighting is good as well as the sharpness. However, I feel the crop is slightly narrow, is there anything to the side's?

**rparmar** · 04-08-2010, 04:27 PM

Originally posted by icywarm

I' think it could be moved more to the left, but also up a bit, cuts off the top of the flower.

I totally agree with that. Only a little negative space is needed to the left.

jct us101 · 04-10-2010, 07:21 PM

This is very nice, but I think it is a little bit underexposed. Maybe it's not, but when I look at it I think it is just a little bit too dark.

04-04-2010, 09:12 PM	#1
shooz Site Supporter Join Date: Jul 2008 Location: Detroit Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 3,491	Petalfall Lens: 100mm Camera: K7 Photo Location: table ISO: 100 Shutter Speed: >6s Aperture: F22 Not sure if this is too centered. The way the petals flow tends to bring the eye to the right. Is there too much darkness to the left? That being asked, I like the feel of the shot. Attached Images

04-04-2010, 10:18 PM	#2
icywarm Veteran Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Location: Saskatchewan Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,278	I' think it could be moved more to the left, but also up a bit, cuts off the top of the flower... nice looking flower... what is it?

04-05-2010, 07:18 AM	#3
mrdfred Junior Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Location: Eugene, OR Photos: Albums Posts: 48	I like the soft, pastel coloring and lighting. The black backround seems appropriate for this subject. The out of focus petel on the bottom bothers me, maybe clone it out? Also, where it is cropped at the top seems abrupt, is there more up there?

04-08-2010, 03:58 PM	#4
Tuner571 Veteran Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: Ohio Photos: Gallery \| Albums Posts: 1,549	I too like the feel of the shot, the lighting is good as well as the sharpness. However, I feel the crop is slightly narrow, is there anything to the side's?

04-08-2010, 04:27 PM	#5
rparmar Site Supporter Join Date: Jan 2008 Photos: Gallery Posts: 8,823	Originally posted by icywarm I' think it could be moved more to the left, but also up a bit, cuts off the top of the flower. I totally agree with that. Only a little negative space is needed to the left.

04-10-2010, 07:21 PM	#6
jct us101 Veteran Member Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: Rohnert Park, CA Posts: 3,793	This is very nice, but I think it is a little bit underexposed. Maybe it's not, but when I look at it I think it is just a little bit too dark.

Macro Petalfall

Win a Pentax Limited Lens: Raffle Now Live!