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04-07-2010, 04:33 PM   #1
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This is a picture of my niece. I thought it was a nice picture and just wanted some of you opinions any thoughts are welcome thanks. I have added a link to the original on flickr please check it out there and also give your opinion of the original it is not as blurry. If anyone has a suggestion on a good program to size photos let me now. thanks

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04-07-2010, 06:11 PM   #2
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A good composition teatma, with a fine pose from your niece.
Problem here is being way out of focus and the subject having flat, textureless lighting that dulls the photo.
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Agree with Ash. The focus is hard to see through to the actual content of the shot. The composition looks pretty nice. Lighting is definately not defining for the subject.
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Thanks for the feedback i noticed the focus issue the original is not that out of focus i don't know if it is because of the down sizing or what but i am going to try to repost using a different resize thaks I added a link to the picture on flickr please check it out there it looks much better. thanks

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It looks like a great photo, but it seems to be a bit out of focus. Great flower by the way!

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