Hey Tuner -- I see a lot of your posts like this, many hundreds in fact. So this time I'm not going to critique the photo, I'm going to critiques the post, OK? Maybe it will help you improve your critiques so that all the people you are trying to help will in fact be helped and not hindered.
P.S. I know you are doing this just to post as many identikit comments as possible for the contest. But maybe after the contest is over you will take what I say to heart. Hmmm... heart. Yes, that
is the subject here.
Originally posted by Tuner571 I like the idea of your photo a lot as it really does look like a bleeding heart, but that are a few things that are hurting this picture.
Of course it looks like a heart -- that's the subject of the photo for goodness sake! He's not asking you to say if it looks like a heart or not!
Originally posted by Tuner571 One is that the photo is out of focus and that always hurts a photo.
No, it doesn't always hurt a photo. It
does hurt this photo, yes, but many other shots might be just great out of focus. I notice you made the same comment on an
absolutely fantastic piece of art in another thread. And that is annoying, since you might dampen the enthusiasm of someone who was on the right track, who chose to ignore what some take as a fundamental principle. These things are there to be challenged.
But, yeah, not this time. This time the flower should be in focus.
Originally posted by Tuner571 I don’t know if you were trying to do this intentionally but this just isn’t working at all.
Um, you just said that. Way to pad out your post!
Originally posted by Tuner571 Another thing that is really hurting the shot is that it is rather dull. The color is great and some contrast could probably do this photo some wonders.
"The shot is rather dull but the colour is great". See, I said the same thing in 18 fewer words.
Originally posted by Tuner571 So if you bump up the saturation and contrast I believe that this shot will look much better.
Yes, you already said that about the contrast. We got you the first time! But why have you changed your mind about the colour? Just one moment ago you said it was "great". And why do you think bumping the contrast will help a shot that is irredeemably out of focus?
Originally posted by Tuner571 Other than those things I really do like it, just go back and try and get a sharper photo before trying the things that I just suggested to you.
Completely unnecessary verbiage with only one purpose: not to help the poster, but to help yourself. This is so tedious. Please give up.