Good stuff. I like the head-on shot of the butterfly. I'm surprised you're able to use the pop-up flash with a lens that long and not get shadowing.
One thing you might want to consider is a diffuser for it. There are lots of DIY solutions, ranging from paper boxes that sit over it, to a cut clear film canister over the flash itself. I've experimented with these with decent results, but lately I've switched to a commercial one. You can find lots of cheap ones on Ebay,
like this, and they work quite well. They're a knockoff of the Gary Fong ones, just $2 instead of $30.
This kind works fine, too, but they're a bit more of a hassle to attach. The upside is, they fold flat and fit in a pocket easily. You could also make something very similar, yourself.
I tell ya, I have no idea how the Chinese can sell these things for $2 shipped and make any profit at all. It's nuts.