It's hard to tell for sure at web size, but the sharpness looks better than the previous shot. Remember that those input sharpening settings are just the place where I personally start out from, and there's always some tweaking required. I don't know if there's a touch of noise in the sky, or if it's just from the compression to web size.
I notice that you haven't set white and black points in your raw conversion, which is the most basic thing that you absolutely MUST do. Use the "Levels" option in whatever software you use. Here's the levels dialog from Photoshop Elements 12 for your actual shot:
You can see from the histogram that it's slightly underexposed because everything is shifted to the left, but the crucial thing is that the far left isn't off the scale, so you haven't crushed the blacks. So it's actually a pretty good exposure to work with and I've left the black point at 0.
The big hump in the middle of the histogram is the main tonal range of the photograph, but you can see that there's a little block on its own towards the right. That's the very bright tones in the mountain. By moving the slider down to 233 at the upper edge of that block, I've set the white point so that the brightest tones in the mountain are just below clipping.
So that's the white and black points set, and for every single shot you need to do this by moving those two sliders to the left and right ends of the histogram.
For your particular shot you can see that I also raised the gamma setting in the middle to 1.03 to lift the middle tones slightly, and increased the black output level to 7 to lift the shadows. That was just personal taste.
Please understand that I'm most definitely not trying to present myself as some kind of expert here, because I'm sure as heck not. But I think you've got a really good natural eye for a photograph, and if this is any help at all then I'm happy.