Originally posted by dcshooter Wow, the good ol' welcome aboard backhanded compliment/slam. Some Internet photography site classics never die.
Originally posted by tibbitts Just curious, what would you change about the composition?
Sorry, wasn't meant to be a slam at all.
It's a really nice shot, and I liked it immediately.
I'm constantly looking at framing on my own shots to see what works better, and I often don't get it just the way I want.
So of course you have to try it and see what you want, what looks good to you, and what works with the scene. I couldn't tell you for sure what I'd do, without being there.
Some potential candidates are changing the horizon/level of the bridge up or down (for example, eliminate some of the empty sky, and get more of the reflection in the water) and moving the frame to the right or left (to show less - or more - of the buildings). But again, you'd have to try it - it might look worse.
The boat in the lower right is a nice touch.
The main thing is to see what draws the viewer's eye to the right place(s).
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Originally posted by abe Earlier, at sunset, I tried to offset the bridge to the right and include more of the city skyline in the left. Somehow I missed to try this from the last vantage point, which was the best one by far.
That's the way it always goes - it seems hard to get all the parts right within the same shot. There's always one part that "I did better in that other shot."
It's a brilliant shot, really. It got my attention right away with its beauty, which is always a great achievement.
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Originally posted by Bagga_Txips Let's encourage his LBA! abe, if you are still in Tokyo, rush and get a Pentax DA15, preferably the older SMC version not the HD modern version. Then take the bridge shot again - this shot is very nice but you will be amazed at the difference the DA15 will make!
The DA15 is a great lens, but it may be too wide for this shot. I think 50mm looks like it was a good choice here.
It's true the DA15, DA10-17, and FA43 all bring out fantastic colors. I suppose I would have used my FA43 if I still had it.
But really, I would just consider swapping the DA50-200 for a DA55-300 (any version) or a used Pentax or Takumar F70-210/4-5.6. The image quality is a little better, and the 55-300 has a nice range as well. Maybe I'd also add the DA35/2.4. I like that lens - especially since image quality is high wide-open at f/2.4, which then also yields nice round bokeh (in a very affordable lens). Everything else is pretty good. He's got the 50, and he got a good tripod.