Originally posted by jtkratzer That's an awesome sunset! Would loved to have seen the first one captured without the P&S or cellphone photographer in it.
It's amazing what a bit of Photoshop "clone and replace" can do.
I too feel that first image is very dramatic -- the young girl really makes the shot by perching somewhat dramatically on that fence rail. The second shot seems static and almost uninteresting, by comparison.
I found it quite interesting that jtkratzer and I came to identical conclusions regarding the person on the edge of the frame. A bit of judicious cropping might help, and also as much cloning as is necessary.