Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden You have some very impressive shots here!
Hi Douglas,
Thanks a lot for all the comments, really appreciate them
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
Fine portrait, placing him in his work environment, fince composition and I like the BW contrast and fine details in both ends of the greyscale. Nice eye-contact.
I really like this one too
One of my favorites from the day.
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
nterresting work sitiation with surroundings. The girl the the background makes the pic more interresting. She looks at you, but the other two are deep into the henna-paingting (?).
Yeah, I didn't notice the girl in the back until I saw the final scan result
Actually I was trying to focus on the two ladies in the front, but I noticed the focusing was a bit off (to the back), so I took the following one right away:
Probably not as interesting as the first one?
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
Very nice eye-contact. She could be worth shooting more. I would maybe crop a little to get a more tight composition. Despite a caotic background you have isolated her well.
I kinda like this one too. You can see there was a table (on which she put all the goods for sale) between her and me, I couldn't get any closer w/ a 35mm lens. If only I had a 50mm lens on, I might get an even better shot on her. She is very pretty I must say
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
Classical portrait well composed. Could have been a little sharper?
Yeah, should apply a bit USM or Smart Sharpening on this one. What I did was batch processing: resize and sign on all the photos.
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
You are good at capturing the work-situation, here a teacher and her children, where she have their full attention. Again, well composed. Considering that the background is sharp, it would have been better to have her in focus and the background OOF.
Actually I tried to focus on the teacher first, but failed due to the low light (inside a Temple) and she was moving all the time. Besides, those kids pointed at me and tell her that I was shooting at them ... I felt kinda shy so I took another quick snap then moved away
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
Fun picture. What is the guy in the background doing?
I didn't even notice he was there until I saw the final result
These cute little girls were posting for their mom (mostly she was, but not really sure), I just took a quick snap when I passed by.
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
Nice how you captured his head so sharp despite the long exposure time. Perhaps some cropping right and left? Square format?
It's pretty dark inside the Temple, even at wide open F2.8, I could only manage to get speed like 1/8 or 1/4. Luckily that man moved very slowly, and I snapped shot when his body was still
I agree w/ you on the cropping part, might enhance the photo quite a bit.
Originally posted by Douglas_of_Sweden
The way only the lady in the middle is perfectly sharp and the others a bit OOF make her stand out (also she is a bit pale) so that her face and here praying is the focus of the picture. Nice thinking!
This was another favorite from that day. Her pale face almost scared me away, and they were all so sincere, I didn't want to disturb their prayer. But sometimes this kind of photos I just have to take.
Again, thanks a lot for the detailed comments, I definitely learned something here