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Forum: Photo Critique
04-21-2012, 09:01 AM
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Alessandro, this is an excellent attempt and works well with the bokehrama approach. I like your processing very much as you have achieved something of a cross processed look without making the skin tones look sickly. As you are inviting composition critique, I find the straight up torso to look a little too centered in the frame. Also, her pose looks a bit unrelaxed, perhaps she was trying hard not to move while you shot multiple frames. This shows in the angle of the right foot.
The only stitching error i spot is a few inches below the left thigh on the rock. Also, there is a bit too much purple/green fringe in the entire photo for my taste, but it is possible that is a look you wanted to keep to simulate a film-era effect. A rough bokeh spot that jumps out at me is the hard edge of that large polygonal rock on the right, exacerbated by the line of green fringe. With the smoothness of the remaining bokeh, i recommend correcting that to enhance the effect. I like the highlights in her hair and her eyes are nicely captured.
Great work!
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