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Forum: Photo Critique 05-27-2014, 04:03 AM

Landscape Morning Delight
Posted By aatifsumar

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Views: 766

Morning Delight by Aatif Sumar, on Flickr

I don't usually Square Crop but it seemed to make sense here. People have commented that the slanting out of focus line through the sun is distracting and should be removed in post-processing. Do you agree?

Forum: Photo Critique 05-27-2014, 04:01 AM

Abstract All Eyes On The Sun
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 2
Views: 893

DSC_1290 by Aatif Sumar, on Flickr

and

All Eyes On The Sun by Aatif Sumar, on Flickr

Can't decide which one to pick. What do you think?

Forum: Photo Critique 03-27-2014, 04:14 AM

Landscape Swiss Landscape
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 13
Views: 1,609

Thanks for those tips. Will keep them in mind. The picture was quite hard to correct. Was taken from a moviing train. The smudges are from the windows I took it through. Was a lot worse in the NEF. Will upload the NEF here in case anyone wants to have a go at it and see what best you can do.

Forum: Photo Critique 03-23-2014, 06:42 PM

Black & White Vintage Car Rally
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 1
Views: 643

Here are two B&W shots from a Vintage Car Rally. What works for you about them? What doesn't?
Title: Regal

[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/aatifspage/13190315733/]

Title: In The Driver's Seat

[url=http://www.flickr.com/photos/aatifspage/13190497664/]

Forum: Photo Critique 03-23-2014, 06:42 PM

Landscape Swiss Landscape
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 13
Views: 1,609

How could this image be improved in your opinion?

Calm Countryside by Aatif Sumar, on Flickr

Forum: Photo Critique 03-16-2014, 06:29 AM

Abstract One Direction Is A Myth
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 7
Views: 774

Thanks guys! How wide can Pentax cameras shoot? This needed a 10mm focal length (35mm equivalent would be 15mm)

Forum: Photo Critique 03-12-2014, 09:53 AM

Abstract In The Shadows
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 7
Views: 999

Another morning shot.

In The Shadows

The trees on the side seemed to be distracting from the subject, which is the tree and its shadows so tried a square crop too. However not too happy with it.

In The Shadows Square

What do you think?

Forum: Photo Critique 03-12-2014, 09:49 AM

Abstract One Direction Is A Myth
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 7
Views: 774

One Direction is a Myth
Interested in knowing your initial and secondary reaction to this long exposure. Shot as wide as I could to get both lanes of traffic in the frame.

Forum: Photo Critique 03-11-2014, 12:47 AM

Landscape All Eyes On The Sun
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 14
Views: 1,044

Thanks for the variety of opinions and suggestions!
@kerrowdown after six days of working the grind, waking up while its dark to shoot the sunrise is almost therapeutic for me! Go home and crash till afternoon after.

Forum: Photo Critique 03-09-2014, 10:16 AM

Abstract It All Started With A Tree (Multiple Takes)
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 5
Views: 1,022

It All Started With A Tree

Here is the original take on this sunrise scene. That's my family silhouetted on the tree.

Had a couple more takes of the scene too.
2.

Mandalpatti Sunrise - 2

3.

Mandalpatti Sunrise - 3

4.

Mandalpatti Sunrise - 4

Would appreciate your feedback on composition, choice of exposure and post-processing. Thanks:)

Forum: Photo Critique 03-09-2014, 10:10 AM

Landscape All Eyes On The Sun
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 14
Views: 1,044

Thanks for the feedback guys!
The problem with going wider is that the sun will appear even small if I do so.
@Sparkle Love your second take on it! Didn't realise the three on the left form this descending trio. Thanks for that!

Forum: Photo Critique 03-08-2014, 11:00 AM

Landscape All Eyes On The Sun
Posted By aatifsumar

Replies: 14
Views: 1,044

All Eyes On The Sun

Here's a shot I captured during sunrise a couple of weekends ago. I kind of got what I was going for, but I'm not liking the end effect as much as I thought it would. How would you have taken the shot differently to make it stand out more? Had glass at focal lengths from 10mm to 200mm, and a tripod. What would you have done?

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