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Forum: Photo Critique 01-05-2012, 08:12 PM  
Landscape Brooms Head Sunrise
Posted By Falke
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Thanks again for the comments.
Forum: Photo Critique 01-04-2012, 03:17 AM  
Landscape Brooms Head Sunrise
Posted By Falke
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Thanks for the comments guys.

Macario, it is interesting how you and most people like the second shot better. I kind of like the other one too as it is less busy. But the light situation, I agree is better in the second shot.

DanielT74, I like the crop that you are suggesting. It would make it a different better pic altogether.

Bruce, I think you are right with the first one, how there is not enough light to draw your eye from the foreground to the background.

While I am at it I would also like to show a pic or two which I took at another time at the same location:



and from the same time:



the latter two pics were done without the grad ND filters by blending two exposures for each shot. High tide seems to be better for a less busy look. I also decided that I not going back to this site other than during winter when the sun rises much more to the left, and the leading lines are more in the direction of the sun.
Forum: Photo Critique 12-17-2011, 12:57 AM  
Landscape Brooms Head Sunrise
Posted By Falke
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Thanks Mychael, I think I might try to light up that Fg. like you say and how Bruce mentioned above that the emphasis, or the foreground is missing. Lighting up the foreground will be a great improvement.

And the second pic, thanks for that encouraging comment.

edit:

first pic slightly changed:

Forum: Photo Critique 12-16-2011, 08:50 PM  
Landscape Brooms Head Sunrise
Posted By Falke
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Thank you Bruce, that is exactly the kind of critique I am looking for. And I like your quote.
Forum: Photo Critique 12-16-2011, 02:59 PM  
Landscape Brooms Head Sunrise
Posted By Falke
Replies: 11
Views: 1,425
Hi there
I am seeking critique on the following two shots:

13 s exposure:


and this one at 0.5 s - single shot - no blend



Edit 2: I was just having a spin out when I looked at the 2nd shot and noticed for the first time how freakishly the clouds almost mirror some of the rocks in front of it (nothing shopped - I swear). Even the little flat cloud on the horizon to the right of the sun has a rock below...

Thanks in advance, Falke

edit :) don't be shy folks I just wonder whether some find it too dark, too golden, too much vignette, too saturated, too unsharp (which places ?). Does either elicit an emotion?
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