from the window |shot was taken at evening
Read themselves! Funny!
I explain. The photo was taken in the evening!
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Interesting composition but it does not quite work for me. The four little branches orphaned on the left of the frame, the rectangular object and fine lines in the upper left and an overall bluish-grey cast to the snow.
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I like the photo but there are definitely some things to improve.
Color is very blue
Cropping needed to get rid of distractions, line in upper left corner, tree trunk in upper middle right edge, tree branches in middle left edge
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You might wish to submit your photos to the Photo Critique area prior to submitting for judging into PEG. I do not see what makes this photo exclusive and there does not appear to be any "WOW" factor.
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Simple, but nice winter scene. Different perspective.
I like the composition . Technique wise....good exposure...works well with bleak winter scene.
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too flat and too random. The light is not artistic or interesting. It needs fixing. The POV is too obvious and looks like a snapshot. It would have been better to clone out the black rectangle on the left (utility access?) for example.
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I think the harsh barren winter would've been more effectively portrayed if you were outside in the snow. This looks like you were shooting from the comfort of indoors from the angle. The trees are not arranged in a compelling way. I would challenge you to really concentrate on comp when there are not many elements in the image.
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This image has a very strong graphic appeal. On the whole, the image is under-exposed by at least 2 stops. Although the meter may have said this was proper exposure, you must remember that the meter is averaging the scene in an attempt to render the finished image at 18% gray, which it has done. This image is of snow though so it should be lighter and this would result in opening up the detail in the snow and making the image more dynamic.
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Never seen anything like it!
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Was this taken just after dusk or with heavy cloud? I can't help but feel the image is darker than it "wants" to be. I love the composition and solitude, but if you could play with the curves a little I think it would be great.
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Image could be sharper
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Very nice
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Nice picture but not good enough for PEG.
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Some will like it, a lot wont.
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Too many stragglers on the edges. PP could be improved, and you're missing a human element, which would contrast nicely.
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Nice texture. Beautiful scene, very dreamy.
Last edited by klosov : 03-10-14 at 06:02 PM